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On your side of our argument by ~babyturkey123:iconbabyturkey123:





Verse 1]
Attention from our lives,
your feelings were disguised,
and now we find out we,
have nothing but ourselves.
As the fall we had,
between us fades away,
I'm saying all the things,
to make you want to stay.

Sub-Chorus]
Just turn your back and leave
while I stand in disbelief
and all the things you should have said to me.
As you walk away
while I stand here in this spot
my lips have saved myself from showing you how much you mean to me.

Chorus]
Questions that are forced on me;
that's the way that you choose to be,
why is everything that's gone wrong-
Building up inside?
I take a dream to pass the time,
I stop to stare and you cross the line,
why is everything that's gone wrong-
Building up inside?

Verse 2]
Lost of hopes and dreams,
what have you achieved?
And now we find that there's
a world between ourselves.
Looking out at you,
there's no-one here for me,
my face is broke and bruised,
my feelings you can't see.

Sub-Chorus]
Just turn your back and leave,
while I stand in disbelief,
and all the things you should have said to me.
As you walk away,
while I stand here in this spot,
my lips have saved myself from showing you how much you mean to me.

Chorus]
Questions that are forced on me;
that's the way that you choose to be,
why is everything that's gone wrong-
Building up inside?
I take a dream to pass the time,
I stop to stare and you cross the line,
why is everything that's gone wrong-
Building up inside?
©2005-2009 ~babyturkey123
:iconbabyturkey123:

Author's Comments

erm this is one I wrote ages ago and updated tonight. Hope someone likes it.

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:iconbabyturkey123:
Yeah, I'll write a happy one soon, I hope.

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!! /!\ > ..I spend days and nights..In my bedroom..Trying to write the perfect song to sing to you..Write a song a day but she won't like it anyway..Back to the drawing-board..With the words you've heard a million times before... < /!\ !!
:icononycho:
Friggin Exellent! The rhyming is marvelous! Keep up the good work!
(if you become a famous song writer one day, I won't be surprised!)
A fave!

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"I like a woman that can kick my ass"- Spike Speigel (cowboy bebop)
"Megan can kick meh ass."-Me
:iconbabyturkey123:
Wow, that really means a lot! I'm not really that into song writing when compared to drumming, but hey; music is my life..I'd do anything to make it.. Even be that roadie selling T-shirts guy! Thank you very much, coming from you that means a lot :D

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!! /!\ > ..I spend days and nights..In my bedroom..Trying to write the perfect song to sing to you..Write a song a day but she won't like it anyway..Back to the drawing-board..With the words you've heard a million times before... < /!\ !!
:iconlucinda-lulu:
i agree tis flab :D.... 4 a happy poem ryt summink lyk I did bout flanigen or Haras :D :D

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And I knew I'd cherish all my misery alone, no loneliness, no misery is worth you

:heart: :heartbreaker: :heart:
:iconinter4life:
Oh wow.. this one is defenatly amazing.. desrves a :+fav: the beat is amazing, and the words are even better... amazing

--
poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.

Carl Sandburg
:iconbabyturkey123:
Thanky veh much! :D That means a lot. Two people have said about the fav thing so far, but no-ones faved it *heart breaks* haha. No i didn't expect anyone to like this one much! Thanky veh much! :)

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!! /!\ > ..I spend days and nights..In my bedroom..Trying to write the perfect song to sing to you..Write a song a day but she won't like it anyway..Back to the drawing-board..With the words you've heard a million times before... < /!\ !!
:iconbabyturkey123:
yeah, I'll try something out. THANKY

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!! /!\ > ..I spend days and nights..In my bedroom..Trying to write the perfect song to sing to you..Write a song a day but she won't like it anyway..Back to the drawing-board..With the words you've heard a million times before... < /!\ !!
:iconlucinda-lulu:
hehehe lol :D

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And I knew I'd cherish all my misery alone, no loneliness, no misery is worth you

:heart: :heartbreaker: :heart:
:icononycho:
*Giant smile* Thanks!
I wanna learn the drums as well...I am going to buy a set this December probably..

--
"I like a woman that can kick my ass"- Spike Speigel (cowboy bebop)
"Megan can kick meh ass."-Me

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